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letter to manager for attending a training program

#manager #program
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in attending
a
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the
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 course " Introduction to Computer programming". I have been
forwaiting
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waiting
for waiting
 an opportunity like
this
. I read the advertisement in the newspaper that it is going to start on August 9. I want to share
this
 with you because
this
 course help me to learn advanced skills which are necessary to adopt in
this
 advanced era. I learn all the advanced features of computer languages which are very easy and time-saving to adopt and help to work fast on any software. I am asking for a favour to provide me with with a discount on it because it is an expensive one. As it is related to computers so it requires various software which all are paid versions. I cannot afford all software to buy on my own but the company can help me to provide free access because these sites are free for companies and educational institutes. Yours faithfully, Navjot
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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