You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Manager, I am Supun Kularatne, a regular customer at your Cold avenue diner. I am writing to complain about a meal I enjoyed with my family at your cafeteria a few days ago. On the 5th of July, I went to the Cold Street restaurant with my family to celebrate my graduation. I ordered two portions of cold street special rice, one portion of Biriyani for our main course, for the desserts four cups of fruit salads mixed with ice cream. The service of that particular day was so unpleasant, that it took almost two and half hours to sever what we ordered. Not only that, we experienced a bad taste of the food. The chicken which was in both Cold Street special and Biriyani was half cooked.

Moreover

, the fruit salad was served, and it had no ice cream. Immediately complained about

this

, to your restaurant your sales representative who at the restaurant at that moment. In reply, he said he had not enough staff to complete the orders. I felt so furious but I did tell them anything and left the place with my family with a heart full of sorrow. Prior to

this

day, I had no memory of happening

such

things. All I had, lovely memories of tasting good food with kind service. I want you to take action, regarding what happened on that day, and if you take

such

please share with me, what are you going to do in order to prevent

such

things from happening in the future. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Supun

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

266 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Structure your letter

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