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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about some
transactions
 which were mistakenly stated in my June 2022
credit
card
 statement. I am J A T S Perera who holds the NIC number 905190113V and the
credit
card
 number 5556678 at your bank. I have
being
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 using your
credit
card
 facility since
year
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the year
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 2014 and I am maintaining a better relationship with the bank for the past 6 years.
Hence
, your bank has extended my
credit
 limit
last
 year to Rs. 400,000/=. I received my
credit
card
 statement yesterday which consisted
with
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 three irrelevant
transactions
 from 20th June 2022 to 25th June 2022. During the mentioned period, I have not used my
credit
card
 for any sort of
purchases
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.
Moreover
, I am not utilizing
this
credit
card
 to purchase electrical items because I have a
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separate
seperate
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separate
card
 to carry out
such
transactions
. I request you to implement corrective actions at your earliest. Two things need to be done in order to rectify the mistake.
Initially
, you are required to send me a confirmation letter stating that
this
 particular amount should not be paid and
an
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interest will not be charged for the same.
Subsequently
, in the
next
month
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 statement, these three
transactions
 should be eliminated. I am waiting for a prompt response from you on
this
 matter. Yours Faithfully, Thuya Perera
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