In some countries, most people perfter to rent thier homes rather than buying them. what are advantage and disadvantage of renting home?
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renting houses rather than owning one. The essay discusses both benefits and drawbacks of Wrong verb form
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this
phenomenon.
On the one hand, its advantages include, initially
, the money they spend on owning a house can be useful for their children's education. In other words
, now-a-days
educational institutes are charging a lot Correct the word
nowadays
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more then
then
they used toCorrect your spelling
than
be
. Unnecessary verb
apply
Further
, these days children are willing to take further
education abroad so, to cope with all those expenses, it's beneficial to rent a house ratherCorrect word choice
than
Lastly
,people are showing interest to spare money on something useful. Elaborating, many think that spending on construction may be a waste of money, instead
they can use it on something that multiplies their earnings. Add a comma
,instead
Finally
, investing on
something that profits us, is the positive of Change preposition
in
this
situation.
On the other hand
, its drawbacks are, firstly
, as rented homes are not permanent, they have to frequently change their place. To exemplify, renting places are owned by some other, so are they are the dictators, we should just obey their order. Moreover
, we do not even have the freedom to do whatever we wish to. To an epitome, my neighbouring is a rented portion, they have to take permission for everything even to utilize water. Lastly
, lack of privacy and frequent mobility are major negative of this
trend.
To conclude, the pros of the trend are they can save those expenditures and invest in some business. Its cons are one cannot live as their wishes and should work under owner surveillance.Submitted by mk.manasa26 on
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