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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#friends #absence #friendship
In
people
's lives, all
relationships
 are influential and shape a person's
life
. These
relationships
 can be family or
friendly
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, so one should look for which
relationships
 are more effective and lasting.
This
 article talks about family
relationships
 that are more lasting.
To begin
 with, Since all humans are born, their family is one of the
first
people
 they meet.
Also
, the family,
in addition
 to being of great importance and respect, is one of the categories with which a person spends the most time, and
this
 makes the family members know each other well and know their moral qualities.
For instance
, When a member of the family is upset, others know how to treat her so as not to increase her mood and,
on the contrary
, make her feel safe and calm so that she can quickly regain her good mood.
Secondly
, Until now, everyone was stuck in a situation where they didn't know
who
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 to count on and trust, but in the
end
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 they chose their family for help because they were always there for you and didn't wait for your compensation and support.
For example
, In the end, in a situation where you get stuck and need help, if that situation is a bit risky for your friends or if it is not comfortable for them, they will easily leave you alone and do not bother them, but the family is always behind you and as long as you want. They stay by your side.
By contrast
,
Although
 some
people
 cannot feel the comfort that they have with their friends with their family and experience the feeling of distance,
but
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in the
end
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 it is proved to them that friends in
life
 are not permanent and are transitory. To conclude, As a person grows older and experiences more in her
life
, she learns not to trust completely
on
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the
people
 who are not permanent in her
life
, and not to spend her time on these
people
, but to spend her time and energy on her family.
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