You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Mr and Mrs James, Greetings, I am Saman from Sri Lanka. I am writing

this

letter with regards to the vacancy advertisement which I read in Australian Sunday Morning on 24th June 2022. I would like to apply for the position that you have mentioned, "Look after a six-year-old child Kevin". Though I am currently working in Sri Lanka as a preschool teacher, I will be in Australia

month for an Educational Tour. So, it would be nice if I can stay with you while looking after your baby. I am experienced in early childhood education for almost ten years now.

Moreover

, during my leisure time, I am working in a day-care centre looking after six kids like yours. So, I hope I am an ideal candidate for the requirement. During my free time, I plan to visit the Canberra Museum to collect some information about aboriginals.

That is

for a lecture, which I am going to deliver after I come back from Australia. Well let me stop here, I am eagerly waiting for your reply to

this

letter. If you need more information, please feel free to contact me. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Saman.

Submitted by sprabasara on Sat Jul 16 2022

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7 paragraphs

199 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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