Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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future
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future
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Thirdly
, if a person selects his major based on his smack, likely he would not have any depression in the future
, because he will perform what he likes. So, it prefers the major is
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studying
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