One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to work in that country; • tell him/her about your skills and experience; • ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)

Hi How are you? and I hope you are doing well. I heard from our friend Rocky that you have recently moved to
Dubai
from Delhi after completing your
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post graduation
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. It has been a while
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we met, please let me know when you are in town
next
time, we need to catch up to discuss
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career prospects and
about
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my personal life. As you know from my school days, I always wanted to work in
Dubai
after completing my engineering degree because the city is rated as one of the best
place
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to live and work in the
asian
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continent and
also
, it offers great scope for engineers in the construction industry. In
the
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recent times, due to
the
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economic developments, the local government has announced plans for
development
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of
mega cities
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megacities
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. These new mega constructions have created huge potential for skilful engineers from reputed institutions. During my
bachelors
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degree, my course was specialized in Civil Engineering and in my
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Masters
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I opted to study project management. For the past 4 years, I am currently working with a major contractor in India as an Assistant Project Manager. My role is to validate the technical aspects of the building design from the constructability perspective and
also
to manage construction activity at
site
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as per the project schedule. I was told by my colleagues that there are good job
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opportunities
oppurtunities
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opportunities
in
Dubai
for
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candidates
canditates
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candidates
with my similar experience and skillset. Since you are already working in
Dubai
, Can you please share details about the salary that I can expect or demand during my interview and the other benefits
such
as insurance and travel tickets family, housing allowances,...etc
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Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Srinivasan M
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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