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Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that cocial skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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The ability consists of social and other expertise.These days many people trust that soft knacks are very important.
Furthermore
, good qualifications for job success.I agree with
this
 statement because improving the quality of business and employees .the experienced staff is an important component in the business sector and plays a vital role in the quality of work .
To begin
 with, many employees get a good qualification in the quality of business.Employers get a good education but their interpersonal abilities are not good .in the other words some employees get able to utilize soft talents but some do not know about personal flairs.
Moreover
 ,
this
 department consists of a professional member of staff who the role of the job by applying.
In addition
 , a significant problem is finding a job vacancy.
although
 most of the workers get high school and high college certificate in their field social skill has an effect on their relationships among employee.The multitasking prowess as the coworkers which have insufficient intellectual level.
for instance
,the person which the position communication with the customer,can not understand customer needs .
thus
 the customer does not want to talk kind of employee and company might decrease line of work reputation
However
, the growing importance of social skills does not mean a man can not succeed without them.There are many jobs today that require little person-to-person contact ,teamwork or collaboration
for example
 software development,which involves writing code is much more about technical knowledge and reasoning
similarly
 ,there are data entry jobs which are based on knowledge about database software like oracle and ms excel. To sum up, it is easy to understand why social skills are given a lot of importance certain professionals can thrive even without social interaction.
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