Nowadays, more and more
people
are migrating from small
townFix the agreement mistake
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to
cities
for better opportunities and
goodCorrect article usage
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lifestyle.
However
,
cities
are facing several
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because of
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over crowdingCorrect your spelling
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. To overcome
this
issue authorities are encouraging
people
and
businesses
to move out of
cities
to rural
areas
and
also
giving some benefits to them.
This
essay will describe the advantages of
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steps.
To being with, if
people
and
businesses
are moving out to rural
areas
, It will positively impact
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many aspects.
First
of all,
cities
are less
crowedCorrect your spelling
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and
costCorrect article usage
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of living will go down. Another advantage is,
businessesCorrect word choice
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will create new job
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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in rural
areas
, and
as a result
,
lessChange the quantifier
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people
will willing to move to
cities
.
In addition
,
developmentCorrect article usage
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of rural
areas
will get faster. And finality there will be less burden on
municipalityCorrect article usage
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and
overallAdd an article
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entire country will
growsChange the verb form
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, not only
cities
.
Though, there will be some
disadvantageFix the agreement mistake
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like growth will be
horizontallyReplace the adverb
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. So, travel time will increase
as a result
goodsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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and transportation
costFix the agreement mistake
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will
also
increase.
Furthermore
,
there will be
lessChange the quantifier
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facilities available in rural
areas
.
However
,
this
disadvantage can gradually
decreasesChange the verb form
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as more
people
and
businesses
are comeChange to the active voice
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to
thisCorrect determiner usage
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areasFix the agreement mistake
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. And, Government
areChange the verb form
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already working on
this
by
createChange the verb form
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more roads for connectivity and school and hospitals and other facilities in
thisCorrect determiner usage
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areas
.
To conclude, overpopulation in
cities
is a real problem, and if government convince
businesses
and individuals to move to
ruralAdd an article
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area it will
benefitsChange the verb form
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both
cities
and country area like
solveWrong verb form
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traffic and other issues and more job in
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country sideCorrect your spelling
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, governments are already working on rural development plans to attract
people
and
businesses
.