In conclusion, junk food should be taxed at a higher rate because of the good precedent set by alcohol and tobacco and the fact that the increased cost should reduce the amount of fast food people buy.

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, the usage of fast foods should be decreased by higher taxation of the sellers,

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alcohol and tobacco. In

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eating type, due to their contents, they are rich in salt, sugar and fats as

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glucose and cholesterol,and obesity. For that

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problem as they did in the other unhealthy habits like smoking and drinking alcohol, in order to, prevent all these

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and their complications, When the items become expensive most of society will think twice before buying them whether it deserves to spend all

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money or not.

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, there are two shops in our village beside each other one of them is fast food and the other is

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shop , so the local municipality charged both of them a tax per year,

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much more than the fruit shop seller, after that the owner of the pizza house told his customers that he will increase the

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cost because of the government money,

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he lost many costumers.

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of the items will not be enough

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education for the population.

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who collect their money to buy one single pizza especially Children and teenagers. In

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for the limitation of the quick service eating habit

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