In conclusion, junk food should be taxed at a higher rate because of the good precedent set by alcohol and tobacco and the fact that the increased cost should reduce the amount of fast food people buy.

Nowadays junk food takes control over the healthy diet and
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poeple's
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people's
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, the usage of fast foods should be decreased by higher taxation of the sellers,
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alcohol and tobacco. In
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we
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we
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healthy
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consequences of
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eating type, due to their contents, they are rich in salt, sugar and fats as
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of
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community may suffer
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high blood pressure,
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glucose and cholesterol,and obesity. For that
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government should take a step
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this
problem as they did in the other unhealthy habits like smoking and drinking alcohol, in order to, prevent all these
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and their complications, When the items become expensive most of society will think twice before buying them whether it deserves to spend all
this
money or not.
For instance
, there are two shops in our village beside each other one of them is fast food and the other is
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shop , so the local municipality charged both of them a tax per year,
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the tax charge which is not
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amount, the pizza house
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much more than the fruit shop seller, after that the owner of the pizza house told his customers that he will increase the
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cost because of the government money,
then
he lost many costumers.
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of the items will not be enough
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education for the population.
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but there are many
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who collect their money to buy one single pizza especially Children and teenagers. In
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, adding some extra cost would be
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helpful
helpfull
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helpful
for the limitation of the quick service eating habit
although
it could not be enough.
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