Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

In today’s world, many
languages
are in all of the countries around the globe, and despite the fact, that some of them perished. it is important to preserve the remaining
languages
. One of the complications of globalization is many local
languages
have died. because encourage
people
to learn international
languages
and many of them do not care and preserve
about
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their local
language
. We all know,
communication
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, in every society.Its tool is
language
.
Language
and culture are vital to make a characteristic identity for every
people
in every country and the customs and rituals of each nation have meaning in their own
language
,
therefore
translating to other
languages
may not have the same meaning. especially When a baby is born slowly during the period of growth with mother tongue to know about their customs, for
this
reason, it is hard to forget all of them and maybe stress factor. local
languages
lead to be more familiar ,makes them feel closer
Moreover
, cultural diversity in a country encourages other
people
to visit these countries and the tourism industry is booming
consequently
the economic community will be better
finally
the
people
have welfare. In conclusion, local
language
and diversity in
language
are better preserved to care rituals and local customs, and
this
helps the tourism industry and economical boom.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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