As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to gather more information about the historical exhibition which will be held in your town

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month. I am planning to bring a group of students as part of their university project. I heard you are the organizer of the event,

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I hope you could give me more details about it.

Firstly

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, could I know the dates it will be held and the agenda for each day ? We will be coming all the way from Ottawa which is a two-hour drive from Clariford,

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we want to be clear about the time we should leave from there and at what time we should ask our driver to come back to pick us up.

Secondly

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, could it be possible to arrange a tour guide ? My students are very keen on learning about all the statues,

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I hope you could arrange us a guide.

Finally

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, Could I know the ticket prices and could it be possible to get a discount ? At the moment, fifty students have confirmed their participation. I would like to finalize everything by

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week,

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I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully Migara Wickramasinghe

migara.dakMon Jul 18 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

203 words

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As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

some children spend hours every day on their smartohones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. -Apologize for damaging the product. -Explain what happened. -Say how are you going to fix the issue.

For some people, shopping is not just about buying what is necessary, but is a form of entertainment. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?