As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to gather more information about the historical exhibition which will be held in your town

month. I am planning to bring a group of students as part of their university project. I heard you are the organizer of the event,

therefore

I hope you could give me more details about it.

Firstly

, could I know the dates it will be held and the agenda for each day ? We will be coming all the way from Ottawa which is a two-hour drive from Clariford,

therefore

we want to be clear about the time we should leave from there and at what time we should ask our driver to come back to pick us up.

Secondly

, could it be possible to arrange a tour guide ? My students are very keen on learning about all the statues,

therefore

I hope you could arrange us a guide.

Finally

, Could I know the ticket prices and could it be possible to get a discount ? At the moment, fifty students have confirmed their participation. I would like to finalize everything by

week,

therefore

I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully Migara Wickramasinghe

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

203 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Internet development has great impact on people’s life. Some people say social media do more harm to the youth. Other people sat they do the great to the youth, Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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