Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think it has made him less social. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether the use of
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gadgets has led to people being more out there as opposed to being more reserved is a highly debated one. I strongly believe though that it has made us more outgoing.
Firstly
,the use of social media apps like
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,
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and snap chat, have allowed people to feel like they have a glimpse of social events,
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and dates which have been posted
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such
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This
in turn can lead to a feeling of being left out and motivate the individual to go outside and attend functions
Secondly
, with technology
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interaction
integration
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interaction
with different individuals from different backgrounds and works of life is basically limited to a couple of clicks on a gadget. Friendships and relationships are generated through
such
means.
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technology and socialization. People have become more laid back in making efforts to physically get up and go out. Shopping which ranging from food
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necessities
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to clothes and furniture can be purchased online without any need for human interaction of
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any kind
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any kind
. In conclusion, I would say that the contemporary use of technology has indeed
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to humans evolving
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more sociable creatures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social interaction
  • connect
  • communicate
  • video conferencing
  • stay in touch
  • online communities
  • forums
  • like-minded individuals
  • global communication
  • collaboration
  • access to information
  • knowledge
  • bridge the gap
  • social isolation
  • detachment
  • face-to-face communication
  • genuine human connection
  • maintain
  • real-life interactions
  • balance
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