As global trade increase many goods including those we use on daily basis are produced in other countries and have to transported long distance. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

Global business increasing their productions from other regions which included our daily basis
goods
. They need to travel a long distance before
arrive
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on our
hand
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. I believe that offshore
production
could help
reducing
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budgets and
increasing
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increase
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quantity
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the quantity
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of
products
, and these two advantages far
outweighs
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any potential disadvantages. The downsides of
manufacture
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manufacturing
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overseas might be lead
a
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huge spending
in
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on
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transportations
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transportation
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and hard to control the
quality
of the
goods
. In
term
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terms
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of saving
money
,
companies
tend to shift their factories and
production
lines to other
low cost
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countries
such
as India,
Vitenam
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Vietnam
and Bangladesh,
result
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in
goods
have
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to
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travel
traval
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travel
a long journey to their destination. Other than that, since
products
are manufactured from alternate
countries
which
also
means that
quality
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of
products
are
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not easy to control, the
wrost
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worst
scenarios could be wasted a lot of
money
due to the lower
quality
.
However
, I think these can be avoided. Businesses could produce less technique part from these
countries
and choose a reasonable transport. On the positive
sides
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side
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,
production
from other
countries
can help global
companies
to cut
cost
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costs
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and enlarge the
quantity
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number
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of
goods
. It is no doubt that
lower
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budget is the key for businesses to survive in today's competitive environment. Most
companies
are willing to spend
money
to upgrade
products
rather than put
many
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money
in
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production
.
Businesses
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men do care more about
quantity
far away than
quality
because of customer satisfaction. I think these could create great advantages for global trade as a whole because
companies
could devote the
money
to other aspects of their business development. In conclusion,
although
offshore manufacturing would result in expensive transportation and
quality
control issues
i
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believe these downsides are greatly outweighed by the upsides that a huge spending
saving
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savings
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and
quantity
increasing
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increase
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.
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