An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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is the reflection of who we are today. Many contend that individuals and society should pay attention to the

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more than that

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the contemporary. I my opinion, though the

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is important,

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should

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think about the present. The essay discusses not only the importance of idealizing the

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but

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about

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the present day. On the

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hand,

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with,

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, we idealize many things by keeping the

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in mind. Elaborating,

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of the individuals plan their

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life

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without bothering about the present day.

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, Every person, even though he is underprivileged, wants to be rich, but if

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can truly

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is a question, because many people just live in dreams. But in some cases planning for

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growth may

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helpful

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as parents wanting their children to study in a better school, so that they can have a better

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, Even though, some families cannot afford to pay

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expenses, they join their children in the same school in order to give them a better

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upcoming

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days.

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firstly

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, if we would live till

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is a question?.

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, many people do a lot of savings for the

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, without enjoying the present, despite knowing that if would spend them in later

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or not.

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, I came across a piece of news about a beggar, who saved the majority of his income, died without even having proper clothes on him, his money nearly 2lakhs

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handover to police, because he didn't have any children to pass on.

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cases seem disgusting and make us aware of the importance of today. So,

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should not only have to dream about the

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but

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prioritize how we are now. To conclude, I opine that the

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matters but not at the cost of today.

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one

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should not always bother about coming days but

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about current existence.

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