An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than the present. Do you agree or disagree?

The
future
is the reflection of who we are today. Many contend that individuals and society should pay attention to the
future
more than that
of
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the contemporary. I my opinion, though the
future
is important,
one
should
also
think about the present. The essay discusses not only the importance of idealizing the
future
but
also
about
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the present day. On the
one
hand,
to begin
with,
initially
, we idealize many things by keeping the
future
in mind. Elaborating,
majority
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of the individuals plan their
future
life
without bothering about the present day.
For example
, Every person, even though he is underprivileged, wants to be rich, but if
this
can truly
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is a question, because many people just live in dreams. But in some cases planning for
further
growth may
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helpful
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such
as parents wanting their children to study in a better school, so that they can have a better
life
.
For example
, Even though, some families cannot afford to pay
study
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expenses, they join their children in the same school in order to give them a better
life
in
upcoming
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days.
On the other hand
,
firstly
, if we would live till
then
is a question?.
In other words
, many people do a lot of savings for the
future
, without enjoying the present, despite knowing that if would spend them in later
life
or not.
For instance
, I came across a piece of news about a beggar, who saved the majority of his income, died without even having proper clothes on him, his money nearly 2lakhs
then
handover to police, because he didn't have any children to pass on.
Such
cases seem disgusting and make us aware of the importance of today. So,
one
should not only have to dream about the
future
but
also
prioritize how we are now. To conclude, I opine that the
future
matters but not at the cost of today.
Therefore
one
should not always bother about coming days but
also
about current existence.
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