An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than the present. Do you agree or disagree?

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The

future

is the reflection of who we are today. Many contend that individuals and society should pay attention to the

future

more than that

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the contemporary. I my opinion, though the

future

is important,

one

should

also

think about the present. The essay discusses not only the importance of idealizing the

future

but

also

about

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the present day. On the

one

hand,

to begin

with,

initially

, we idealize many things by keeping the

future

in mind. Elaborating,

majority

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the majority

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of the individuals plan their

future

life

without bothering about the present day.

For example

, Every person, even though he is underprivileged, wants to be rich, but if

this

can truly

happens

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is a question, because many people just live in dreams. But in some cases planning for

further

growth may

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helpful

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such

as parents wanting their children to study in a better school, so that they can have a better

life

For example

, Even though, some families cannot afford to pay

study

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expenses, they join their children in the same school in order to give them a better

life

upcoming

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the upcoming

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days.

On the other hand

firstly

, if we would live till

then

is a question?.

In other words

, many people do a lot of savings for the

future

, without enjoying the present, despite knowing that if would spend them in later

life

or not.

For instance

, I came across a piece of news about a beggar, who saved the majority of his income, died without even having proper clothes on him, his money nearly 2lakhs

then

handover to police, because he didn't have any children to pass on.

Such

cases seem disgusting and make us aware of the importance of today. So,

one

should not only have to dream about the

future

but

also

prioritize how we are now. To conclude, I opine that the

future

matters but not at the cost of today.

Therefore

one

should not always bother about coming days but

also

about current existence.

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