Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many companies nowadays would rather have people who had
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with other jobs and customers rather than them having knowledge. I for one agree with
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in the upcoming essay. There are many reasons
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and why I agree as well.
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, having
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could help in many ways
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as knowing how to solve and escape a major problem faced before. Humans with
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knowledge could be nervous and don’t know what to do in these types of situations.
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could help to
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in a very efficient way with customers and co-workers .
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, individuals without any idea how a job is completed will need training for a long
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can be a waste of
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for many organisations that don’t have
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to train and pay money for their trainers. To add more, the trainee could fail the training and it could make the money used for them go to waste.
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, a person who knows what to do
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need any training as they have done these jobs before. So
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could be better for companies as they
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need to spend
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on training them or waste
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on useless subjects.
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,
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would benefit the company by having an intelligent worker who knows his way around, and the
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worker will
gain even more
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to add up to his
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time
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. Overall, individuals who know what to do in the workforce are better than those who have general
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knowledge and no working
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, I agree that the benefits are far
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