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In countries where there is high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are some opinions who think don’t let students offer middle school, but offer primary
education
 with a high rate of unemployment. I think it is a narrow reason. There are a lot of different reasons to become
this
. On the one hand, there are many reasons for the high rate of unemployment. The economic environment is one of the common problems. When the economic environment is bad, work will lack which makes
people
 find the
jobs
 handly. It is because when the environment is bad, the company don’t want to apply the employee to control the money that allows
people
can’t
 find
jobs
. And companies choose to find highly educated more than low educated. While
people
 have a high-level
education
, they have many different choices.
On the other hand
, having high-level
education
 which is not only good for children to learn
knowledge
 like math, Chinese and English but
also
 allows children to learn how to build relationships with others.
This
knowledge
 is good for
people
 to find
jobs
. When
people
 learn more that they can find more different
jobs
.
For example
, when
people
 want to be a businessman, they need to learn maths, English and economics which we
can’t
 learn in primary
education
. Without the
knowledge
, we
can’t
 find a new
job
 while we lose the
job
 and only find one type of
job
. To conclude,
people
can’t
 find a
job
 not only because of their
education
 but
also
 because of other reasons.
Conversely
,
education
 is more important for
people
 to find different
jobs
 when they have more
knowledge
.
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