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Multinational companies improves the quality of life in the foreign countries where they sell their goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#companies #quality #life #countries #goods
Thanks to globalisation, multinational
companies
 can now set up their businesses throughout the world.
Although
 some
people
 feel that it leads towards a positive trend, I,
however
, believe that it has a negative impact
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foreign countries.
Firstly
, Multinational
companies
 dominate the local markets in the way that
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 can go bankrupt,
people
 will stop purchasing
goods
 from their local shops and will start getting approaching the foreign supplier of
goods
. While I concede that the products of global reputation with
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higher quality can get in
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 lower cost, the problem is that it is directly damaging the local production houses and their
goods
. Employment is
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another area of concern, there is a high possibility to hire
people
 on low-paid salaries and select unskilled labours for their work. Supporters of multinational
companies
 claim that it can be helpful in providing employment opportunities. Take example they can build factories and can provide jobs to hundreds of
people
.
However
, I would argue that it can affect the local workers who got better skills in their field.
Moreover
, it can
leads
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 negative impact on
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society,
for instance
, culture can become homogenized. In conclusion, not only multinational
companies
 can lead the local markets to go bankrupt, but they
also
 cause
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foreign countries to lose their unique heritage.
Therefore
, I acknowledge that they produce high-quality
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goods
, but I disagree that they improve the standard of living.
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