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Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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,reduction of motive for academic education might be the primary
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. There are several drawbacks
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. One compelling reason for believing
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activities
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 a broad range of pupils embark on
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 of art in the middle of their attending universities to
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 future. In spite of these negative effects,
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activities
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of universities task as
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entertainment has brought some merits and demerits ,
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 up their schooling.
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  • teamwork
  • networking
  • time management
  • physical fitness
  • stress reduction
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