Considering that adults spend much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important. What factors contributes to job satisfaction ? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees ?

Work has become an essential part of our lives, and considering it a necessity, many people contribute
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of their lives working without being fully satisfied
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their jobs.
Therefore
, a lot of
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companies
considers
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the
job
satisfaction of the employees to be the top
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priority when it comes to the labour market.
To begin
with ,
job
satisfaction depends on several fitting reasons, like salaries, working environment and development prospects.
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, wages play a predominant role in affecting
job
content.
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, money helps employees attain their basic needs.
Besides
, it is deemed a symbol of accomplishment as higher salaries reflect a higher degree of contribution to the organization.
Secondly
, the working environment
also
plays a crucial role in influencing
job
contentment.
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