you have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter 1. Explain why you would like the job 2. give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ 3. say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to apply for the caretaker job to look after your child as mentioned in the newspaper advertisement.
This
is an amazing opportunity for me to spend my break
time
in
australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
show examples
while I wait for the completion of my residency visa process. I have completed my schooling in India and planning to move to
australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
show examples
for my
further
education and thinking of getting the country's residency. I am living with a big family here in my home country and when I travel to
australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
show examples
. I am going to miss my family a lot
especially
Add the comma(s)
,especially
show examples
my younger brothers. Fortunately, if I get
this
job,
then
I can spend a good amount of
time
with a family and most importantly I can be with your kid whom I will consider
as
Change preposition
apply
show examples
my brother. As I mentioned above, I am used to
be
Wrong verb form
being
show examples
with a lot of
Correct your spelling
children
children's
childrens
Correct your spelling
children
most of the
time
, and being an elder child in our family I had to look after my younger brothers since they were born as my parents were working. So, I believe I can take good care of your baby and please note that I am very good at reciting rhymes and singing
Add an article
a lullaby
show examples
lullaby
Fix the agreement mistake
lullabies
show examples
for your little one. During my free
time
, I am planning to prepare for university entrance exams and I have a bucket list of tourist places that I always wished to visit in
australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
show examples
- mainly the beaches. I will spend some
time
visiting these attractions. Along with
this
letter, I have attached a personal photograph of myself, my visa application process and a reference letter from my cousin who lives in
australia
Change the capitalization
Australia
show examples
. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Regards Srinivasan M
Submitted by msrinivas7866 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
What to do next:
Look at other essays: