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Write an application for an international vacancy that you saw being advertised -state why you want the position -state why they should hire you -ask any questions or further information about the position Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter with Dear Sir/ Madam……

#application #vacancy #-state #position #-ask #questions #information #sir #madam……
I am writing in response
of
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 the Chef job advertised in the newspaper
of
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 19
july
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 2022. After reading your job description,I am confident that my skills are perfect for
this
 position.I am a
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hard-working
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hard working
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 lady,
self motivated
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,energetic with good communication skills. I am willing to
work
 hard and add knowledge with experience since I have been working
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 that position for 8 years. I am ready to
work
 at your company. I can face any target as I am able to
work
 under pressure
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 my current job.I wish to learn more,
work
 as a team and take your company
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 another successful level. I have 8
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experience
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. The enclosed resume summarizes all my skills and qualifications.I would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. I look forward
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 your response as early as possible. Yours Faithfully Ashanti Chimombo
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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