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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort o f punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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These days, came up with a topic that whether
children
 should be taught the difference between
right
 and wrong in the early stage of their life or not.Many parents have a variety of perspectives.
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 parents considered it a must-done thing in their teaching method in daily
educations
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. Nowadays,
schools
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 teachers use
abundance
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 of ways to punish students who be in bad
behaviour
.But, importantly,
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 reasonable penalties are
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values
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 for
children
.
For example
, teacher
get
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 to know a bad
behaviour
 in a kid,
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a
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thorough thinking, the punishment given
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 on the bad
behaviour
instead
 the child, in
this
 way, the child realised the problem and corrected immediately
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 in a pleasant ending, which showed the importance of schooling teachers to punish kids in a
right
 way. At the same time, in most families, parents are more close to
children
,
then
, it is convenient to have a sit-down discussion along with a slight penalty or none.A friend of mine had recently told me that in his young period, his mother talked to him a lot, and little punishment
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 taken on him, he felt that it was a real
right
 and warm family atmosphere, which shaped him
an
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 outstanding person. Families
plays
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 a fundamental role in
this
 issue. In my personal opinion, teaching kids to discover
the
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right
 and wrong in the early years
in
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 their life is worthwhile and necessary.It
not
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 only a strict
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,
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 but an advantage in your later ages. In my prior years
in
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 childhood, my father always taught me to know
right
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 and wrong things in my daily
behaviour
. Though it was a hard time for a young kid,
but
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father’s instructions gave
clear
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me clear
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 judgements in my later life until now, and
it
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 will follow me forever.Knowing the differences between
right
 and wrong will guide me in the future. To sum up, there may be plenty of
the
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point of
views
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in
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 whether punishments
is
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 needed or not, but I think it is really crucial to guide
children
 in a decent correct way.Helping them to meet a better themselves in years to come,
nevertheless
, influencing the greater outcome of kids personalities and later developments.
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