Finding it hard to remember important facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time. Apply in writing to: You see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory. Write a letter to the organiser of the course. In the letter give some background information about yourself explain your own problems and why you would like to do the course enquire about the methods used on the course enquire about course fees and dates

Dear Mr Abdullah Hope you are doing well. In fact, I am writing
this
letter to enquire about your
course
. Let me tell you about my background information.
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I am working at the law firm as a senior associate and our firm specialist
is
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banking law
and
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in my free
time
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I like reading books because I believe reading could help in sharpening memory and provide vast knowledge which I implement too to balance my work and professional life. But recently I have some issues in my memory
such
as
forget
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all information which was from several
month
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in addition
to that, I fell recently huge headache that effected on my job so, I need to do
this
course
perhaps
this
course
help me. I would like to know about some information in
this
course
such
as your
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and method in
this
course
and
finally
the cost. Best Regards
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