Traffic and Housing problem could be solved by moving large company, factories and their employees to countryside

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traffic and lack of

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for houses. There is not any benefit if giant companies, factories and their worker shifted to villages. I disagree with

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statement. I will explain my disagreement points in the upcoming paragraphs.

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, it will damage

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and pollute the entire environment. As the ruler areas mostly depended economically on agriculture and micro enterprises,

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factor not only surrounded the farming

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destroy the occupation of dwellers.

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, in the city of

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tried to replace citizens and their companies

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village

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that they did not find any advantage. While, they destroy their resources ,as well as;

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of new

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infrastructure was caused for pollution.

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. To elaborate,

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of investment and time. When the company owner

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shifted

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their business workers as well before that,

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they have to pre-built buildings, in which

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employees

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work.

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, it is too much expensive.

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, employees of that businesses will be unemployed, just because of in

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come. In conclusion, the task of

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of city

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village

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is the cause of many major issues

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the

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agriculture and

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the pollution in villages.