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Some people think that governments should provide unemployed citizens with free telephones and opportunities for using internet to help them to find a job. What to extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #governments #citizens #telephones #opportunities #internet #job
The supplied bar chart compares people  the data of Canadian people who gave to charitable organisations by various
age
groups
 in
percentage
 for the years 2000 and 2015. Overall, it is noticeable in the chart that the
age
group
 of 35  to 49 had  the highest figure in 2000, as well as, the adult
group
 maintained  the lowest criteria throughout the  whole period of 2015. In 2000, the
age
group
 of 18 to 24 had exactly the
percentage
 of 20, While the
age
group
 of 25 to 34 had a figure of just under 30. In fact, 35 to 49-year-old people peaked the chart at 38%, as well as, two older
groups
 climbed the
percentage
 of 34 by 50 to 64 and 36% by 65 and over. In 2015, the adults had a digit of 11%, which is the lowest compared to the four other
groups
,
In addition
, two
age
groups
 of 25 to 35 and 35 to 49 had a ratio of 25% and respectively. In the end, two older
groups
, mainly so to 64 maintained a number of 37%, compared to the
age
group
 of 65 and over who had the
percentage
 of 34%.
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