You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager and explain what happened. Describe the watch and ask them to help you find it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to request you to find my watch which has been left at your premises a couple of days ago. I am Dr Sakshi Vashist, a resident of Ropar, Punjab stayed in your hotel on 15-18 July 2022 with my family for a vacation in Manali. I think I put my watch over the corner of the washroom of room number 301 in your hotel. We reached home

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morning and I realized that one of my smartwatches is missing from my luggage. Probing

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with the details, it is a black-coloured strapped watch which has a noise sticker on its back. It might be placed somewhere in the washroom as I vaguely remember I kept it there before using the washroom as it is not water resistant. I could be so grateful if you could find it and let me know about the same. I would be very thankful if you could courier my watch to the given address and I assure you that I will make a payment for the charges it takes. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you, Dr Sakshi Vashist

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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The Closing

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