To solve the problem of traffic congestion govt should provide free public transport 24*7. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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should supply free public transport in order to tackle congestion s on the road have been becoming debatable matter. As far as I am concerned ,
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the one hand , the truth that can not be denied the today with the increasing population and exponential growth of urbanization, the transportation needs of the people have increased rapidly pace and
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leads to the problem of bottlenecks which are
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and global problem around the world, the main cause is lack of investment or funding for infrastructure in the form of high-capacity public transport and increased road space for private vehicles
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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