To solve the problem of traffic congestion govt should provide free public transport 24*7. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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There has been a controversy about whether free public
transport
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24x7 can solve the problem of
traffic
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congestion
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. I think there are other solutions which are more effective. My answers will be explained in the following paragraphs.
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, limiting the registration of vehicles. Take China as an example. In many Chinese
cities
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,
such
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as Beijing and Shanghai, not everyone can get a
license
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plate; drivers must do a lottery or buy a
license
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plate so as to drive legally.
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, the chance of getting a
license
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plate is not high, and the price is pricy. The reason why
this
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policy prevails is that the government tends to control the
number
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of vehicles in
cities
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by controlling the
number
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of
license
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plates.
As a result
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,
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a policy has prevented hundreds and thousands of potential car buyers from buying a car;
therefore
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, the problem of
traffic
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congestion
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has been alleviated to a large extent.
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, setting up high parking fees in
cities
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. In some big
cities
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, like New York, Hongkong and Singapore, the parking fees are incredibly high if you tend to park in the city centre.
Although
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this
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policy doesn't seem nice to the local residents, it lessens the issue of
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congestion
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considerably. As a consequence of high parking fees, the
number
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of vehicles on the street has reduced, and the road passing rate has been promoted substantially. With the solution of providing free public
transport
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, there are some issues.
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, if public
transport
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was free, the
number
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of passengers would increase largely.
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, it would be crowded and uncomfortable to take the bus or train. As a consequence, many people will choose to drive again in order to stay cosy, and eventually, the problem of
traffic
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congestion
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will reoccur. In conclusion, there are two main solutions and the idea of providing free public
transport
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doesn't really work.
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