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With the development of tourism, more and more cheap and discount flights are made available to holidaymakers. Some environmental groups claim that governments should tax air traffic more because its growth has tremendous impact on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Since the
airplane
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 has been invented, more and more
people
 start to travel abroad, and the capacity and volume of
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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 have become greater than before,
this
 would cause a lot of problems
such
like
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as
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air
pollution
 and bird strike. With the prosperity of
aviation
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the aviation
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 industry, there
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is more
ismore
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is more
air
pollution
 than before. Some
people
 argue that
if
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the government should
tax
 more on
air
traffic
. There are a number of factors at play, as I shall discuss below. On the one hand, some
people
 might think it is not an effective way to
tax
 more on
air
traffic
,
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 because the companies would transfer the cost to consumers, which might let the companies make more profits.
Therefore
,
government
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the government
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 should take other measures to avoid
this
 situation.
On the other hand
,
tax
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taxing
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 more on
air
traffic
 would reduce the desire of
people
 to travel abroad, because they would face the growth
of
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in
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 ticket prices,
the
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and the
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 cost of
traveling
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travelling
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 abroad would be higher than before, in
this
 way, the number of
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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 would decrease, and it will
also
 reduce the accidents and
air
pollution
 caused by
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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. And others would think that the
air
traffic
 companies should take the
responsibilities
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responsibility
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 for the
air
pollution
, so it is reasonable to
tax
 more on them. As far as I am concerned, I support
government
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the government
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 should
tax
air
traffic
 more, but they should
established
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 complete laws to avoid the situations I mentioned above.
Furthermore
, they
also
 can use other ways to control the
air
traffic
,
for instance
, they can restrict the number of
airplanes
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aeroplanes
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to fly
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 abroad, in
this
 way,
people
 won't afraid of the increasing flying costs.
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