Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a certain school of thought who have the notion that it is greatest to accept a poor condition
such
as lack of funds or unsatisfactory
Correct article usage
an unsatisfactory
job
, others opine that efforts should be employed to improve such
conditions. This
essay shall endorse the former view, however
the two divergent views shall Add a comma
,however
be outline
after which a feasible conclusion shall be made.
On one Change the verb form
be outlined
Correct your spelling
hand
had
, fear of not getting their Correct your spelling
hand
desire
jobs is one of the enormous reasons individuals think it is preferable to accept any Replace the word
desired
job
. With the growing population and lack of piece
of work, Add an article
a piece
people
are forced to take up anything they are offered.Admittedly if people
accept poor conditions such
as unsatisfactory job
,it can go a long way to affect their work output making them not Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
to
put in their best. Fix the infinitive
apply
For
example
it was recently published that Add a comma
,example
people
who were forced into the teaching profession are not performing well and that has affected the students in their final exams. This
has caused total failure for this
year’s exams.
On the other hand
, taking up courses is the main reason some individuals believe it is better to improve. When people
can upgrade themselves and get to higher ranks, they will be have
a wide range of opportunities to choose from and not be given anything Change the verb form
have
that is
not acceptable. Even though, if people
upgrade and have a lot of opportunities available, that not withstanding
, they will still be faced with the increased unemployment rate affecting individuals globally and so will not have any option Correct your spelling
notwithstanding
than
to accept any offer. Correct word choice
but
For
instance
it was reported thatAdd a comma
,instance
,
a lot of Remove the comma
apply
masters
holders who could not get theChange noun form
master's
manger
positions have applied for divers and cleaners Correct your spelling
manager
position
in the same company.
In conclusion, after assessing the two divergent views, it is seen that the merit in accepting a poor condition is better. I will Fix the agreement mistake
positions
therefore
recommend that people
take up any job
offered them
so they can make something small which can sustain them than Change preposition
to them
to
stay idle waiting for their dream jobs .Fix the infinitive
apply
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