Nowadays, we can see definite sign of surplus production in almost every industry sector and thus is leading to environmental damage. What is some possible solution to this situation?

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productions are increasing sharply.And

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of the environment in the air and water.

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and the solution as well. In

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the number of consumers

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are

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increasing, and because

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factories

increase as well. So that's because we live in a world the people in it really focus to have a

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income,so when the businessmen see that there is a high demon in a product they will produce it. But the huge number of manufacturers leat to a big

problem

"the environment

problem

". The

first

problem

is the gas that's come from the

factories

that impact the ear, for ,

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that affects the atmosphere, so, that will lead to

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in the number of

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and the plants will not grow up well.

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, the west of manufacture. Some

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of the

ofthe

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of the

factories

get ride of there west in a bad way for due they do not have a convenient

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to throw in it, and

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the life under the water

especially

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the fishes and can make some of the water sources not able to drink. There

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numerous solutions

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those problems.

Firstly

, the countries must do a deal between them to reduce the gases that come from their

factories

.

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the countries must put lows that can decrease the impact of the gases and the way of the get

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of the wastes .

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try to make the employes

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aware

toward

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the ramifications of

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not

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of

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the environment. To sum up,

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environmental pollution is now the main

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among

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open-minded people and scientists because they are aware of the dangers if

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people

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care about the plant