The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below illustrate how the village of Stokeford altered from 1930 to 2010.
Overall
, the most vivid changes shown are the increased infrastructure, the disappearance of farmland and the fact that the area became more urbanised.
To the north we can notice a bridge that was not moved or changed, meanwhile, the road that passes through it developed into more
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However
, the farmland on both sides of the road (west and east of it) completely declined, allowing some of the space to be used for building more accommodations.
In the middle of the map, there is a primary school that had an addition of new
building to it making it bigger. Opposite Add an article
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it, there were shops in 1930 that Change preposition
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2010and
turned into more properties. The post office next to the shops remained the same. Correct your spelling
2010 and
However
, the large house with gardens developed into a retirement home. In addition
, some of the gardens were cut and turned into more houses.Submitted by tanya2013draganova on
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