Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a company or an institution. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

There has been a significant increase in the total number of entrepreneurs in our country all thanks to the new economic policies.
Although
some suggest that working as an employee for a company is more rewarding, others argue that self-employment is a better alternative. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, while I support the latter opinion. On the
first
hand, some people, who believe that a job in a company is a better option, might say it offers job security. The reason for
this
is that working for a firm offers steady monthly income and ample growth opportunities, providing its employees with a platform to grow personally and professionally. To illustrate
this
point, a person working for a corporate firm does not have to worry about meeting their monthly expenses.
In contrast
, if people left their regular jobs for the sake of running their own companies, a lot of them will fail because of cut-throat competition.
On the other hand
, I would
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is equally rewarding if not better. TH
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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