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The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia .

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia .
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The provided column chart illustrates the audience of TV programmes in case of maturity party and sex. At first glance, it can be clearly seen that the 45+ age group has
the
Correct article usage
a
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 higher rate
amoung
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among
 the other groups. The provided column chart illustrates the audience of TV programmes in case of maturity party and sex. At first glance, it can be clearly seen that the 45+ age group has
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
 higher rate
amoung
Correct your spelling
among
the other groups .

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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