While choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

These days, most people choose their occupation according to the amount of the

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they are expecting to get.

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should be

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when choosing a

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, I believe that there are

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other important factors to consider. On the one hand,

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is important for a worker to make a living on his own because the three basic needs, food, clothing and shelter, are major things for a man. It is

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said that

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is the

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God and most people cannot deny it in their daily life.

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, it is common that if a

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worker does not get paid enough to sustain his basic needs, he will not get

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satisfaction and will quit the

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sooner or later.

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will lead to many losses in human resources for the

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owner as well.

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, if people choose jobs only for

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, other problems can arise. The

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thing to consider apart from the

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is

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environment, which is related to whether the

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is dangerous or it is against the state laws.

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of a bad working environment is working at a risky construction site where an unexpected accident can damage the workers' life. The

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consideration should be the experience that the

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will offer.

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much

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the

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pays, if the

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does not make any

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, a worker should move to another

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which guarantees a better experience. To sum up, despite

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the

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, a person should make

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considerations for his own safety and career development.

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, I hereby disagree that

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is the most important thing

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choosing a

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.