Many countries are experiencing population growth, and need to build more homes. Some say that new homes should constructed in existing cities while others argues that new towns should be built to accommodate the growing population. What are the advantages and disadvantages of these point of view?
It is certain that
grovernments
need to Correct your spelling
governments
built
more residential areas due to Change the verb
build
growing
population. While many believe that it should be built in current rural areas rather than develop a new town. Correct article usage
the growing
However
, more households in present cities
could cause many different issues. New towns
development can provide more spaces for living, enhancing people
living conditions. This
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easy
eassy
will discuss both views in the following paragraphs.
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To begin
with, people
live
in Correct pronoun usage
who live
cities
can have more job opportunities and benefits but it also
can be result
in various issues. Undoubtedly, more and more Change the verb form
result
people
tend to move to cities
because they are well-developed, offer lots of employment chances, entertainment and leisure facilities provide a
experience to Change the article
an
people
and also
accessibility to anywhere. Nevertheless
, they also
lead to different kinds of problem
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problems
such
as overcrowded, congestions
and Fix the agreement mistake
congestion
pollutions
. In order to Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
satisfying
housing needs, Change the verb
satisfy
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square
squre
feet of property space Correct your spelling
square
is
built smaller and smaller by governments and developers, affecting Correct subject-verb agreement
are
people
living conditions and standards.
On the other hand
, that could be an advantage if people
able
to move to new Add a missing verb
are able
towns
due to outskits
provide considerable spaces for accommodate. New Correct your spelling
outskirts
towns
provide a
plenty of Remove the article
apply
lands
for housing and other land use, Fix the agreement mistake
land
people
could living
in larger spaces. Not only Change the verb form
live
be living
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beneficial
benefitial
for their healthCorrect your spelling
beneficial
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
improve their lives. Although
some may think that transportation would be a problem for travelling around the cities
, as long as a well
town planning, moving to Change the adverb
good
new
town is Add an article
a new
a
best solution to solve Change the article
the
overpoplution
.
In Correct your spelling
overpopulation
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conclusion
coclusion
, it seems thatCorrect your spelling
conclusion
,
more construction of accommodations could cause Remove the comma
apply
a different kinds
of Correct the article-noun agreement
different kinds
a different kind
issue
in current Fix the agreement mistake
issues
cities
. Despite living in new towns
might have a transportation issue
, Fix the agreement mistake
issues
for
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in
long
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the long
terms
, new Fix the agreement mistake
term
towns
development could be a trend for Change noun form
towns'
town's
dealt
with increasing population.Change the form of the verb
dealing
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