Give details of the job & position you are applying for Explain why the reference is important Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...................

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Dear Mary, I am writing

this

letter

to request you a

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refrence

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reference

for a

postion

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position

portion

of software employee in

multinational

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company. In

this

job I will be dealing with IOS

developer

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developers

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and

anylzing

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analyzing

the code language of software, my

responsbility

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responsibility

will be completing projects in given time and updating my team leader. As the company offers only

few

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positions

postions

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positions

for

particular

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post they are so keen about selecting freshers even though I scored good marks in

interview

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later on they

prefred

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preferred

me to bring

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reference

refrence

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a refrence

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letter

which makes my application more valuable. Or else the application will be rejected without attaching

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reference

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a refrence

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refrence

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reference

letter

Moreover

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this

job is important to me to gain

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experience

experince

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experience

and knowledge. Which will be more useful to my career. I request you to please provide me

letter

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with mentioning my skills and personality with

signature

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my signature

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on it. I will be

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grateful

greatful

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grateful

if you add some vital information

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regarding

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regarding

training hours and projects which I completed

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campus

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. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Karan Mummaneni.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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28Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

174 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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