The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

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Dear Mr Brown, I am writing
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letter to make a request regarding setting up a new cafe for employees in the office. Let me explain to you about the problems that are faced by our respective
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, our office does not has any separate place to eat.
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, some
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do not have lunch which results in health illness as they undergo starving for a long
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, due to busy
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schedules, the employees do not have
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to eat which indirectly leads to less energy and
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less productivity at
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. As far as my feelings are concerned, to
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continuously for 8 hours every day, an individual needs a break and should eat something to regain the lost energy during
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. In order to do that, there should be a pantry section in our office, where the employees can have their lunch for a definite
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period. I am sure other
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would feel the same. I would like to suggest that our old record room which is vacant for a year, could be converted into an eating section for a temporary period; it would take some
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to build a new cafeteria. Being for the
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,
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would be ready to adjust in the old record room. Looking forward to positive action from your side. Your's sincerely, Amandeep Kaur
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