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You have decided to leave your current job due to some reason. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, tell him about the decision and mention the reason for it describe what you have learnt in the job request for a recommendation letter and experience letter

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 Jonhson I am writing to regretfully inform you that I am not in a position to continue my current role in
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 organization as I have got an excellent job offer in my domain of interest from another company. It has not been an easy decision for me to make as I have had a precious time here with my professional colleagues and learning the latest practical skills. Apart from
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organization
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 help me to grow and evolve into the efficient manager that I am today so I thank you abundantly
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 me with an opportunity to be a part of the company that has enabled me to get a hold of time-management, team-management and leadership skills. It would be
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 of you to issue my experience letter stating my expertise in the management area and my roles and responsibilities too. I would really
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appreciate
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 it if I could receive
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 letter at your earliest
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 sincerely,
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saved
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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