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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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 letter to apply for a job in your post office as I have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper and I am interested in
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 opportunity. My name is Karan, I am from Nizamabad Telangana . I completed my three years degree course in Hotel Management from Osmania university. I am well interested in courier-related work, as in my college days I worked 20 hrs per week in FedEx services for one year. There I was engaged in pickup and delivery packages of customers and packing things in store,
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, I have a driving licence to drive courier trucks as well. I have good communication skills and I am familiar with the local languages,
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 making it easy to communicate with customers. I am always fascinated to interact with new people, In future, I like to start my own business as a courier company so it will be more helpful for me to gain knowledge and experience . Apart from that
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 job will help me to fulfil some of my goals, by earning an extra income. I am looking forward to a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Karan Mummaneni.

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