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Q. As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem that may result.

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To begin
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top-notch in today's century.
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 a whole lot has been improved so far with the
use
 of modern devices. In
this
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 some work that computer has replaced and
also
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the negative outcome.
Firstly
, before now most works like farming
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 done manually with equipment like hoes ,
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 ,
this
 is no longer invoke since the production of modern machines like tractors which
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 made work load less and easily accessible for many .
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, with the involvement of many individuals who help in the cultivation
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 thereby reducing the crisis of low employment status whereby making people
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find a source of living.
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, producers of most manually tools now
lacks
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 confidence in producing and
also
 barely meet up with the cost of living.
Furthermore
,
postoffices
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 are no longer in charge
in
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 delivering messages for
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an individual
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individual
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 to their loved ones who are far. Prior to now people
makes
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use
 of
canoe
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 for transportation to far and neighbouring places to transact business and so on , Again, cloth designers who were in the idea of using needle and thread to make clothes for people are been affected
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 the
use
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Also
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 most labourer who does minor jobs to sustain life will be out of
job
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. In all
this
 , the negative outcomes
prompts
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to
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unemployment and for one to be acquainted with the
use
 of
computer
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a computer
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 , education has to be acquired in other to know how to handle the new machines.
For instance
 in a situation
where by
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a low
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low class
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 individual cannot afford funds for education the dream
working
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 in companies that make
use
 of modern devices will not be accomplished.
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