There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting you and others • Suggest what could be done about it
Dear sir/madam
I am writing there is
this
letter to bring it to your attention that there is an issue with bus
service from which I travel to my Correct article usage
the bus
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workplace
work place
To embarkCorrect your spelling
workplace
on
, I am using Change preposition
apply
this
facility since 2019 and it was worth commuting from it but, from
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in
past
few Correct article usage
the past
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weeks
week
Add a comma
,week
this
journey is getting awful. Firstly
, due to less number of buses during pick hoursAdd a comma
,
huge
rush and passengers are not able to get seats Correct article usage
a huge
specially
elders people, Replace the word
especially
secondly
it always runs late Add a comma
,secondly
hence
it lead to delay in reporting at work place
. Correct your spelling
workplace
Moreover
, the air conditioning is
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does
dose
not Correct your spelling
does
work
properly as due to numerous commuters it leads to suffocation. As I am suffering from asthma it is nearly impossible for me to come and go by it.
Apart from this
, I would like to suggest yo
to implicate Correct your spelling
you
few
changes which will cause Correct article usage
a few
a
relief to individuals who make Remove the article
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a
use of your service. Remove the article
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Initially
, the
good ventilation shaft should be installed if climate control does not Correct article usage
a
work
. In addition
to it, few
new vehicles should be introduced which can distribute the pedestrian.
Thank you for consideration of my request and hope to get a Correct article usage
a few
positove
revert from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
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Vandan
Patel.Correct your spelling
Vandana
Vanden
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