There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting you and others • Suggest what could be done about it

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Dear sir/madam I am writing

this

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letter to bring it to your attention that there is an issue with

bus

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service from which I travel to my

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workplace

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work place

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To embark

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apply

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, I am using

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facility since 2019 and it was worth commuting from it but,

from

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past

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few

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week

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this

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journey is getting awful.

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, due to less number of buses during pick hours

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there is

huge

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rush and passengers are not able to get seats

specially

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elders people,

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secondly

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it always runs late

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it lead to delay in reporting at

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work place

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workplace

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, the air conditioning

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does

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dose

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not

work

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properly as due to numerous commuters it leads to suffocation. As I am suffering from asthma it is nearly impossible for me to come and go by it. Apart from

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, I would like to suggest

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you

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to implicate

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a few

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changes which will cause

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apply

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relief to individuals who make

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use of your service.

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the

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good ventilation shaft should be installed if climate control does not

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to it,

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new vehicles should be introduced which can distribute the pedestrian. Thank you for consideration of my request and hope to get a

positove

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positive

revert from you soon. Yours faithfully,

Vandan

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Vandana

Vanden

Patel.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

209 words

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