Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days there are sayings about the
deference
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between
women
and men in terms of their
strength
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strengths
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and weaknesses in work. The question is, is gender can be
hindrance
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a hindrance
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in
the
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jobs
? In
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essay, I am going to write my opinion and draw
conclusion
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a conclusion
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. In terms of advantages,
that
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the world did not differentiate between
women
and men in work in terms of
strength
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strengths
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and weaknesses. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that today large numbers of females occupied political positions, which in the past were only for
male
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males
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. To illustrate, studies
shows
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that most
of
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parliament
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the parliament
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seat in the world have
occupy
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occupied
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from
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women
and they have
popularity
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a popularity
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.
In other words
,
women
can be succussed in any
positions
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position
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.
However
, there are some reasons that females cannot take any
jobs
especially
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,especially
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that related to power
such
as construction
jobs
.
Firstly
, A
women’s
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woman's
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body is designed
no
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not
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to competitive a
men
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man's
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body.
In other words
, there are some games for
women
and transgender participate in it and they won
it
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apply
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by a big margin over the
women
.
Secondly
, females go through a monthly phase I mean period and it is difficult for
women
to occupy sensitive positions
because
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ofbecause
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the impact of
period
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the period
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on their decisions. In conclusion, we noticed that there are
different
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differences
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between sexes in some
jobs
but,
this
is does
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not prevent that woman makes huge success in every
places
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place
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.
Although
we must respect
women
’s bodies and make them live in their lives.
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