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Some people think it’s better to choose friends, who always have the same opinions as them other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In summary, There are two types of
friends
 in
this
 world. one of both is a buddy who wants to give only a good view not to make you upset. Most of the time, they used to agree with your opinion. sometimes, they disagree with your ideas but they wouldn'
t
 reveal their feelings and
thoughts
. And another type of friend is one who expresses their own
thoughts
 frankly. In
this
 case, we can more easily face arguments than folks who give only positive sides. If we select a friend who takes the same opinions, there are pros and cons. A plus aspect, in
this
 case,
this
 case is that we don'
t
 need to be concerned about their response because we can expect that they'll show their bright and warm smile and answers all the time.
On the other hand
, if our
friends
 always don'
t
 display their minds, we aren'
t
 able to know their real
thoughts
 and if we are in situations where we know nothing so need help and our
friends
 don'
t
 give an opinion despite they have an idea, it's going to be a catastrophe. On the other side, if we choose one who gives their
thoughts
 freely, it is possible that we contact certain uncomfortable feelings. when they give an adverse thought. For these reasons, we might hesitate to show our sincere minds.
However
, if there are
chances
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other ideas, it can lead us to make a clever decision. In my viewpoint, I want to choose
friends
 who display their real judgment because I think that
friends
 are supposed to help each other to live properly. Suppose that when we meet a partner who has a bad attitude, we are neglecting those problems. If we are real
friends
 and we catch those things, as a friend we have to talk to our fellow to stop and leave the terrible relationship. I believe that sorts of these processes are going to help us grow and take a life healthier.
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