Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
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people
would prefer to spend their entire life close to their native places may
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and lack
opportunities
in other places. However
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of knowledge and exposure with respect to culture and lifestyle practice in other parts of country
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the legacy
opportunities
in any other place and moral responsibility towards their community
and family. In addition
to this
, individuals might have a strong sense of belongingness towards their native people
, culture
which they cannot leave behind. For Correct word choice
and culture
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people
and community
and have the same expectations from their future generations to practice the same. Hence
, individuals may have a strong feeling of patriotism towards their community
and family ethics which makes them remain close to their local land.
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, the advantages of being close to the local boundaries are sense
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people
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people
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effects
such
as lack
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, limited
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and limited
lifestyle
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and lifestyle
practice
in other parts of the country. Fix the agreement mistake
practices
Moreover
, it may reduce the
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For example
– Any individual who might have expertise
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the expertise
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multinational
national
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a national
Therefore
, it is important to be aware and experience of
practices conducted in other parts of the world.
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community
in health and sickness which may result into
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a lack
opportunities
, and experience in life.Submitted by nidhianand31 on
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