You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding an issue I am having with an electric

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which has your company brand on it. Let me explain more about the issue. Around a year ago I bought the

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from Home Depot and they issued a two-year guarantee for it. Recently, the

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stopped working because of broken gear, and it caused an interruption in my orders. I am mostly working at home from my garage to repair the bikes, so the lack of

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equipment made me use manual time which takes a lot of energy and time.

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, it affected my orders a lot and caused so much delay and dissatisfaction among my clients.

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, I contacted you to provide me with a solution to fix the

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or replace the equipment with a new one if the guarantee it covers. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks and regards, Amirali

parhaashTue Aug 02 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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6 paragraphs

158 words

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