Read the question below and write a letter.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write at least 150 words. Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: * Explain the situation * Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date * Ask for a different date to present your thesis

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter, requesting you if there can be a slight change on my project submission as the current date is clashing with one of my important events in life.
Firstly
, the thesis deadline and my sister's marriage fall on the same weekend in the coming month.
Although
that week I would be travelling to my native Spain
thus
both tasks can not be performed at the same time.
Moreover
,I have always achieved great scores in my academics throughout my course if you wish I can share all my certificates and previous records. I even achieved golds in scientific research presenting University.I always felt proud of being part of
such
a great campus.
Finally
, I request you to please alter the dates of thesis submission as any day of the
next
week after the marriage can be suitable for me
of
Change preposition
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marriage as
such
an occasion does not appear again in life. Looking forward to hearing some positive news from you. Yours Sincerely Tushar K Patel.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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