The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about the data of female and male British workers in two main types of jobs in 1992.
Overall
, more than half of female employees worked non-manual jobs. However
, male employees had almost equal percentages in manual and non-manual jobs.
It is clear to see that managerial and professional account greater part of the two gender pie charts. 34% of men work in this
field, slightly higher than women by 7%. Following
this
, the second
highest choice was another manual, with 27% of women which is just over 1% of men.
However
, there were two types of employment which were the very huge difference between female workers and male workers. 31% of female labourers worked in clinical or related. It was over 5 times larger than male labourers.on the other hand
, in craft or similar industry
, the number of males overtook that of women. Fix the agreement mistake
industries
Additionally
, not many British employees worked as general labourers and other non-manual
.Correct your spelling
non-manuals
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